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Post  KingNickolas on Wed Mar 23, 2011 2:03 pm

Or you could just unlock the other page hovel. Gawd, maken me go through all this trouble just to continue a conversation. >_> (You probably just should have deleted the spam since that was actually a good topic that two other people were participating in. >_>)

And omigawd, i broke the fking rules menace. lol It's not like the rules really even matter anymore. This forum is pretty much dead.
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Post  Dr.Pain on Wed Mar 23, 2011 2:21 pm

Ok i'll start.

Pain didn't even take out his blaster to try to stop the crazed mapper Dilemah. He decided to flee. But something in his heart told him to go help Nick even though he wasn't on his side. He pulled out his Ckit and ran into building. "For the RC!". He looked around Dilemah wasn't even there. God that was embarrassing. He ran over to Nick and started healing him and Pain waited for him to wake up but he wasn't doing so. He continued for 20 minutes still no signs. Then suddenly Nick coughed! Yes! Pain thought 'If it takes this long for him to fully heal how much hp does he have??? How much damage did the rail gun do???'. Nick got up.

"You saved me!"
"Course I did."
"Now that was bad, we need to stop him! We need to form a team!" Nick said.
"We are a team!" Pain replied. Nick rolled his eyes.
"We need a better team. I have the power of humans and aliens, but you can only build human objects. We need a granger specialist."
"Ok that sounds like a plan. I know a good one. In atcs there's one named George. He is the best of the best."
And with that they left for atcs to find George the Granger.

(Next person write in Georges Point of view please!!)

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Post  Menace13 on Wed Mar 23, 2011 3:09 pm

kingnickolas wrote:Or you could just unlock the other page hovel. Gawd, maken me go through all this trouble just to continue a conversation. >_> (You probably just should have deleted the spam since that was actually a good topic that two other people were participating in. >_>)

And omigawd, i broke the fking rules menace. lol It's not like the rules really even matter anymore. This forum is pretty much dead.
;P

but seriously hovel, locking every thread won't solve anything

And with that, I bid you ado.

BUT WAIT @ HOVEL

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Post  KingNickolas on Wed Mar 23, 2011 6:05 pm

lolmenace. And pain, You're awesome. Just absolutely awesome. Good job. I love you.

Just for that, I'm gonna reply:



George the granger was running around furiously looking desperately for his superior in command, Ductape the basilisk. He couldn't find him, no matter where he looked.

He looked down, sighing a frustrated breadth. He wasn't getting anywhere with this, and the granger machine was still getting away! He decided it was probably likely the alien had left Ethereal. But if that was true, then that would mean that he had broken the rules... The overmind had specifically told them NOT to leave the nuclear station. Even so, now the overmind was dead, and there was nothing really stopping him... Oh well, he thought, looks like he would have to leave as well. The granger machine was the major thing here.

For a while he scuttled along feeling depressed. Then he came along, and found something that surprised him. It was ductape... Or at least his bloodied corpse... The alien had obviously been shot many times by one of those mass drivers. Looks like tony, his friend from collage would have to wait, he needed to pay a visit to the human base...
(Sorry pain, I had to override a bit of what you put in for him so that the story might make sense. Razz )
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Kingnickolas and Dr. Pain limped along to get back to the human base in Gomeisa, so Nickolas could rest for a while. Nick had decided to side with the humans for a while.... For now.... But he made a promise to himself that he wouldn't betray the overmind. It had, after all, bestowed him with his new found powers.

He looked back on the events over the past few hours. He and pain had walked for a while, looking for the explanation - what Nick assumed was an alien overmind invasion of the territory. But suddenly for whatever reason, the granger machine dropped on them from almost nowhere. The two had done the obvious thing to do, and grabbed the granger machine and tried to hike it out of there. But suddenly, some TMD's popped up out of nowhere and were going to attack them, when suddenly a rough figure had popped out of nowhere and started shooting at them. Distracted by him, the people were momentarily distracted, and Nick started to try to put the machine down to try to help. But as soon as he had turned around to face the newcomer, he shot him in the face, and swiped the granger machine from his clutches. Thankfully, pain was there, and was able to heal a bit of his human self to the point where he could limp, wavering under his immense weight.

At the moment, they were in the great Veddek station, waiting for it to dock. They sat in a storage compartment, where nobody would be able to see the ravaged face of Nick's. Nick looked over to pain and said getting up with a shake, "I think there are alien forces on this vessel..."

Pain's eyes widened, and he said with surprise, "Really, are you sure? How do you know?!"

Nick retorted, "I just can, ok? I can feel the overmind in my head. Maybe I can get contact with it, and convince it to send an advanced granger over here somewhere so that I can heal..."

"Wow! That's amazing!" Pain said. At that point in time not much was known about alien intelligence, and pain almost felt a breakthrough coming in for some of his granger-specialized research.

"Yeah... I know..." Nick said with a sigh. He concentrated a bit. Talking with the overmind was unlike any experience he had ever felt in his life. There were no lies. As soon as he made contact with it, it's senses observed him, like a scientist over a new specimen in a microscope. It knew his every thought for as long as he had been connected to the hive mind. It knew his needs, and he knew it's. It seemed as if there wasn't conflict between species at the moment, but there WAS one advanced granger about that might be able to help his condition. The overmind sent it without a wavering thought.

Soon it had arrived, and Nick was nearly fully healed. Pain sat by silently, not knowing his immediate future, hoping not to be killed. Nickolas knew what he had to do then.

"Dr. Pain," he began, "It seems that we will be having a common goal for a while..." Nickolas knew he was in charge, at least for the moment. "We're still going to the human station on Gomeisa. But we're not gonna be able to get the granger machine back for a while.... You can wait for a little while right?"

"Of course." Was pain's reply.

"Then we're going to do whatever it takes to do this... We're going to kill Dilemah."

*DUN DUN DUN! I hope you don't mind people participating. That was a kinda long one. lol. And swamp, I hope you don't mind if I make your character a bit of a villain for now. Razz *
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Post  Dr.Pain on Wed Mar 23, 2011 6:52 pm

Awesome! King you're writing skills are highly developed!

George was doing his speediest scuttle towards the humans base to get revenge on Ductape. George had absolutely no experience in granger combat and he regrets not Joining GBA (The clan that specializes in grangerised combat!). He jumped from box to box and finally arrived at the human base. He saw a strange metal elephant that turned and shot him! What the hell is that such a interesting object it turns and shoots. It's way better than our hives... He decided to not risk entering that way and he made a detour. He was walking into their alternate exit and he strolled next to two towers which then abruptly stunned him...What is this? He thought, Its is similar to an acid tube but it has more fundamental mechanics to it. Wow I will i could devote my life to human buildings. I always wanted to see a human base...
"Now your chance." Said an ominous voice in his head.
"Who are you?"
"I am the Overmind"
George was stunned he had heard from the commanders and field marshals on his team that they do no work and the Overmind tells them what to do... He had never imagined that it would ever talk to him!
"What do you want? umm Overmind?"
"You're interested in human buildings, thingamabobs and thingamajigs?"
"Umm yeah..." George replied.
"Alright meet an odd looking fellow at Veddek station, storage compartment. He will explain how you will help find the Granger machine and stop a foe so incredible it's able to destroy everything!." The Overmind said.
George was eager to help so he left for the Veddak station. He packed his... well he has no possessions so he just left.

Get ready for some ACTION!
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Post  swamp-cecil on Wed Mar 23, 2011 7:55 pm

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Alex continued playing the piano. Not like there was anything else to do. His machine he adored so much had turned agaisnt him due to insectoid mutants, and killed everyone in the facility. Now, here he was, eternally stuck in his rusty area he called a home which only contained a piano and two benches. He hit rock bottom. He even dug deeper than that, and now hes in the end of an abandonned mine used for feeding "the machine" he created. Since he killed it as a last resort, he isolated himself from the world at the bottom of a mine with its entrances spammed with danger signs. The only way to revive himself is to take a host corpse. More specifically, his own, which he hurled at the bottom of a pool of lava. His only choice was to impress god with his piano skills so he can enter heaven. His station was now a common warfare place between humans and aliens.
DilemaH wasnt impressed. He wanted the humans to come, so he can revive the machine at the station and GTFO then rekill it then place the granger machine in a secret area. As one of the 3 sons of Alex Corrdino, he had a great degree of intellect, but he used it for evil. He owned the station after the death of his father. He remembered the death of his grandfather. He temporarily killed all aliens, until the hivemind sent out his remaining minions on the planet pandora so the alien race will perservere. Those 16 remaining aliens, AKA the lucky 16 have rcreated the war. His grandfather died after a granger named kyp spat on his face, making him unable to see when a raging girl beat her off the cliff of unreation into the pit of no return. Kyp was one of those 16, along with 2 other aliens he knew named vesh and sigig.
He was busy sharpening his railguns bayonet when suddenly a nearby turret shot a few bullets at a shady image across a corner. He picked up his railgun and headed out. Right before he turned th corner, he charged hos railgun to 100%. He went around the corner of the courtyard and shot at the aliens position. He missed the granger by a couple macrometers and it fled. He shot it with a stun needle and caught it when it landed. He then put it in a cage in the courtyard and then locked it. There was something about this granger. It reminded of the words "kyp " in his head, which the word kyp multiplied and filled his head. Was it him? Maybe a descendant, he wasnt sure. All aliens are descendants of the 16, so probably he is. He kicked the cage to a side and walked away.
George woke up. Was he dead? Was he alive? Was he in heaven? Well, not heaven, and definetly not dead because heaven n'or hell is a cage. He then came to his sences. He was shot in the neck with a tranq and put in a cage.
"You have been caught" Said the ominous voice
"How do i get out of this metalic hovel? It HURTS""
"Study the entire hovel. As a descendant from the 7th of the 16, (kyp) you should easily figure this out. Besides, its similar to the 2 towers"
in 9 minuites and 12 seconds, he understood the object.
"Ok, this metal box attached to these 2 bars keeps it closed. If i enter a correct code on these 4 switch numbers, it would open"
"Smart one. What are the numbers, then?"
"Errrr...Shit."
"Look inside. Use creep to feel around inside."
He felt around using a stick of creep and in 5 mins he unlocked himself.
"Yay! Im free!"
"Now, stay low until reinforcements arrive. Stay under the landing pad in the water. 2 humans, one a hybrid of a granger will need your help to obtain a machine hidden within this facility."
He hid under the landing pad and looked at two round eggs with several stands. It was exaling smoke. What was it? probably just a storage structure.
He was wrong. It was two oversized artifcial lungs of "the machine"

1. no one will make up what the machine does. I allready have it planned.
2. Its alright king. antagonist is fun :3
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Post  KingNickolas on Thu Mar 24, 2011 4:22 pm

( @ Pain: Thanks! Very Happy You too. )
(Also, is there something about kype the granger that I am missing? Surprised I haven't read that story on tremforums in forever.)

The Veddeck station landed with a dull thud, felt by everybody on board. Nick and Pain began to head out, hoping to escape through some near-by ventilation. Nick said his final good bye's to the overmind, and the two began their track to Gomeisa, to get to the human base.

As soon as they arrived, several marines popped out of their heavily fortified base and began to shoot at them. It looked like it was shoot first, and ask questions later around here... However, when pain signaled them on their HUD, they let them join the team chat and all was explained. The men were confused at Nick's appearance at first, but since Pain was a superior officer to them, they had no right to grumble.

When they walked up, one marine said, "What happened to you, Nick?!" He sounded surprised and sympathetic, so Nickolas told him. He was now part of neither team, but for now he would be on the human's team. The marine was QweefZilla, or that's what they called him anyways. The two had been friends for a while. It was just by chance that Qweef had ended up in this military base... The three touched base, and headed into the maze of MGTurrets and Teslas to the RC. Once there, Nick briefed the team of 4 marines that were there at the moment about the current situation. There was somebody there... A very powerful man, with the power to create and change landscapes, who had a very powerful and dangerous device...

It didn't take much to convince the bunch to join sides, they already trusted Nick, and Pain was a Doctor on base construction tactics who had built the very place they were standing in. It was an easy choice. Now was just the time to come up with a plan, which Nickolas supplied with fervency. He would go out alone, and convince the Alien team to join forc~

"WHAT, NO!" Yelled a marine who was catching the drift of the plan. "I'll never join the side of those suns of bit**es! They killed Fred!"

"So you just want to go out alone against a menace with far more resources, and a far more tactful mind all alone, just the six of us?!" Nickolas retorted, laughing hysterically at the ludicrous idea. Suddenly sober, he continued, "No, we have to get their help. They have the manpower and the tactical mind that we need."

The men were stumped a bit at the decision... The Aliens had been their enemies for as long as they were alive... Was it really worth throwing all that away just so that this man could be brought to justice? To help enforce his argument, Nickolas continued, "Look guys... This will be worth it. I promise. This man has the ability to destroy whole worlds, even star systems if he wanted too! He must be stopped, at any cost. Besides, we only have to be allied to the aliens for a small while. Afterwords we can just go back to the way things were." The promise was made, and the men sided with him, deciding that his argument was sound. That night, Nickolas would venture out into the night, and see what he could do about the aliens...

(More tomorrow. Razz I'm tired. You guys can still do whatever you like though. lol.)
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Post  swamp-cecil on Thu Mar 24, 2011 5:59 pm

He waited to long. They werent coming. The only liife form he saw in hours was Alex and that granger. He tapped his fingers on the computer in the room beside the room below the one with the giant whole. The mouth. The supplier. He impatiently smashed the "activate button" He only heard one clanc. What the? The machine should be finished its cleanup! Then he remembered. There was one more button to press. And that was near the alien settlement. Before walking there, through the battlefield, he thought of instead sending out a probe for him. It was his best idea, so he did.

THE STORY OF GOMEISA

Alex felt gloryfied. He just practicly made a machine that would stop the entire alien race and kill them all again. Just like his fathers invention, but with less human casualties. This machine wasnt an ordinary machine: It had the IQ of more than 4000 and could kill anything it sees, even inamite objects. The machine was, not something buried deep below the ground, but infact the entire station was one giant AI robot. It served as a distraction from procyon, which contained most of the worlds human population, since gomeisa was closer to pandora than procyon. The aliens would invade it, because of its many missiles lodged inside itself which would find and identify any non-human lifeforms near the facility and strike them down. There were many parts of the machine, the two spheres outside were the "lungs", which purified air for the facility, and the easiest to see was the "mouth". The robot ran on proteins, minerals and almost every form of matter in the universe, including living being if they fell in the mouthal cavity by accident. This all powered this colosal robot. One man made a joke about the machine at a conference "The tubes and organs are so scattered and thin, anything moving faster than 10miles per hour could spill the entire contents of the machine!" He had this quote comming. "No. As the Red Blood Cell Bots bring nutrience, each robot would deposit its contents on the crack and wait for Repair Robots to properly patch it up". If an invading alien manages to escape the clutches of the missile, White Blood Robot Cells would burst out of the organs or tubes, leaving a whole to fix and kill that being. They would then go back in the tubes, as if it never happened. Then, Blue Blood Robot Cells would come out of that very crack if it didnt get patched up and use the corpse of the dead alien as power. How could this machine fail then? Well, Luck, and an alien invasion that included one third of all the living aliens. more than 3/4ths of those aliens got shot down before landing. The rest created an outside base and killed the lungs so their base wont be attacked by microscopic robots. 'Lisks then poured gas in the lungs, but it didnt affect the facility because the Red Blood Robot Cells allready made an artificial blockade to the interior deep inside the system. They then moved out to the least defended area: the manacment room. They then made a base on the higher parts where the cells couldnt get them, and spammed acid, trapper spit and hivelets in a proken tube. It took 1 hour until the brain sector was fully infected. It now spat acid, hivelets and trapper spit at humans via the tubes. Alex had one thing left to do to save the entire population of Gomeisa from his creation; the core meltdown. He ran to the lava room on the tubes which were spraying out alienoid stuff at him, which he repelled with his flamethrower. Then, he reached the meltdown PC and typed in the password, then the command
/meltdown
In less than a second of the ENTER key, all the lights went off. When they came back on, no more acid nor trapper spit came out. And by that time, Reinforcements have arrived. He Then had a nervous breakdown. He killed the thing he loved most in the world. So, he walked slowly to the secret mining hut and started playing the piano until he died of starvation. His last note he played alive was a D flat. His body rolled back into the lava, but he stilled played. Nothing more he can do.


DilemaH's ship to invade Veddak station has almost arrived, loaded with aliens. Not The aliens under the rule of the overmind. Aliens with giant metal claws and some that shot lazers from their mouth. The Unvanquished, which he took control of all their minds and ruled them all.
The probe then managed to reach the PC without being ripped to particles by alien. It typed the password, and typed the command
/initiate_revival 1
>Initiating revival.
The entire facility then shook. His probe got knocked off its stands and got hurled into the water along with 2 other marines and a dretch. He smiled. But, something didnt feel good. He noticed he felt...worse. He went to check the piano. His father wasnt there. His father was, alive.
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